ext_165751 ([identity profile] distractedone.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thehappyfangirl 2008-02-21 11:41 pm (UTC)

This is really good.

My favorite line:
He comes before he even touches her, the spasms waking him as he grinds into the mattress.

Because that is *SO* "hormonally teenaged" Julian - coming before Emma even touches him. Oh gosh.
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